This is a run-on sentence. Thesis statements should be much shorter and not include so much detail.
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Does this include leadership and legacy? Does it make sense and portray Scagaweas role in the Expedition?
Sacagawea played a major role in the succes of the Lewis and Clark Expedition from helping with translating and navigating to calming and gathering food for the exploresrs, she left a trail of inspiration and impacted countless people,including a half dollar and many memorials made in her honor.
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