Directions:

Question

Using the argumentative thesis statement you wrote in the previous question and based on a claim from your Unit 4 portfolio outline topic or using this alternative to using the U4 Portfolio: Write a well-developed paragraph with a counterclaim to your argumentative thesis that includes the following:

At least one sentence with a counterclaim to your argumentative thesis statement. Counterclaim is the other side of the argument. (2 pts)
At least one complete sentence refuting and providing a rebuttal to the counter claim with evidence from U4 outline. (2 pts)
At least one complete sentence to wrap-up your argument that clearly supports the main claim in the thesis and persuades the reader to take action. Your conclusion should include: what do you want to persuade the reader to do after reading your argument? (2 pts)
Use effective transitions to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, rebuttal, and evidence. Tone is consistent for argumentative writing. (2 pts)
Be sure to check for spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure before you submit your response. Be sure to write in paragraph format. (2 pts.)
** Please USE the RUBRIC to understand how you will be graded on this constructed response.

(10 points)

Answer 1

One counterclaim to my argumentative thesis statement is that technology is actually beneficial for individuals' mental health. Some may argue that technology provides a platform for individuals to connect with others, seek support, and access resources that can enhance their mental well-being. However, this counterclaim overlooks the potential negative impact of technology on mental health. Research from my Unit 4 outline has shown that excessive screen time and social media use have been associated with increased loneliness, depression, and anxiety. Additionally, studies have found that the constant exposure to a digital world can lead to decreased self-esteem and body image issues. Despite the potential benefits, it is crucial to recognize and address the detrimental effects of technology on mental health. By limiting screen time, practicing mindful technology use, and encouraging face-to-face interactions, individuals can take steps towards maintaining their mental well-being. It is important for readers to consider these negative effects and take action to prioritize their mental health by finding a healthy balance between technology use and real-world interactions.