Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.

Question

11. My friend and I ate soup.

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12. Anna took her dog on a walk.
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13. Lucas cleaned his room.

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14. Abigail helped her mom bake a cake.

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Answer 1

11. My friend and I ate steaming hot, savory chicken noodle soup outdoors, underneath a big oak tree during a chilly autumn afternoon.

12. Anna strolled slowly with her fluffy, golden retriever dog named Max, along the sandy beach at sunset, with the sounds of crashing waves and seagulls surrounding them.

13. Lucas meticulously organized and dusted every corner of his cluttered room, while the smell of fresh lemon-scented cleaning spray lingered in the air.

14. Abigail playfully sifted through flour in a big, bright kitchen, laughing with her mom as they frosting a three-layer chocolate cake, with sweet vanilla and cocoa scents wafting throughout the house.