“Diana woke up on an oddly warm winter day. She ran down the stairs. She quickly ate her breakfast. She headed out the door. She went to her friend Mellissa’s house to work on their act for the talent show. She loved to dance. She knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show. She was ready.” What makes this passage weak?

Question

“Diana woke up on an oddly warm winter day. She ran down the stairs. She quickly ate her breakfast. She headed out the door. She went to her friend Mellissa’s house to work on their act for the talent show. She loved to dance. She knew Mellissa was a good partner for the show. She was ready.” What makes this passage weak?
A. It is full of clichés
B. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
C. It needs to be proofread
D. There are no issues

GPT 3.5 · Answer

A. It is full of clichés

The passage contains clichés such as "woke up on an oddly warm winter day," "ran down the stairs," and "she was ready." These clichés make the writing seem unoriginal and lack creativity.