Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for this role due to my passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive demeanor. Additionally, I am highly motivated to work in order to save up funds for a new game system. I have attached my resume for your review and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides. I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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