It's a beautiful letter, Laruen.
However it would be better if you made these corrections.
You were a brave man. You were a man who would do whatever it takes to stop people from taking away our Civil Rights. You were a man with a beautiful wife and family. You were a man who became the public face of a movement. You were a man who tirelessly worked, marched, got arrested, spoke on the topics of peace, love, and justice and promoted peace. I'm really proud of you for all the hard work you did throughout your life. I wish you were here today!
Thank you, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. Without you, who knows where we would be today.
Dear Dr. King.
You was a brave man. A man who do whatever it takes to stop Civil Rights. A man with a beautiful wife and family. A man who became the public face of a movement. A man who tirelessly worked, marched, got arrested, spoke on the topics of peace, love, and justice and make everyone in peace. I'm really proud of you for all the hard work you done throughout your life. I wish you was here today!
Thank you, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. without you, who knows where we would be today.
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Thank You Ms. Sue! :)