Create a full-sentence outline that includes effective arguments and counter arguments to support your thesis. (Note: Outline only the body of your paper.) Remember to avoid bias and fallacies and to include rhetorical devices that strengthen your writing.
Answer the following:
Where did you place the most effective arguments in your paper?
Explain your reasoning.
How did you address counter arguments without weakening your own premise?
My topic is the dangers of driving while useing a cell phone
Thesis:
Driving while distracted, and the use of cellphones in particular, is a primary factor in a majority of car accidents, resulting in billions in damages and thousands of injuries each year, and this dangerous behavior must be stopped
1 answer
Your thesis sentence is much too long. I suggest you shorten it and repost.