Could you please check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you.

1) I shouldn't leave money on the desk during the beak.
2) I have to call home if I'm feeling sick (I feel sick):
3) I have to bring all my school equipment to school.
4) I can get/take (both?) a snack from the vending machines or at the school cafè during the break.
5) We should bring from home all the books we need for classes.
I can't remember all the rules but I think respect is the most important.

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I'm not Writeacher, but I hope this helps.

1) I shouldn't leave money on the desk during the bReak.
2) I have to call home (COMMA) if I'm feeling sick (I feel sick): PERIOD AND EITHER
3) I have to bring all my school equipment to school.
4) I can get/take (both?) a snack from the vending machines or at the school cafè during the break. ("TAKE" HAS A CONNOTATION OF STEALING.)
5) We should bring from home all the books we need for classes.
I can't remember all the rules (COMMA) but I think respect is the most important.
By the way, the subject is English rather than art.
I agree with PsyDAG on 1, 3, 4, and 5.

In 2, no comma is needed, and both variations will work fine.
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