For #2, who did the voting? Then a better sentence can be written.
In #4, it's "think" -- and put the question mark outside parentheses at the end of the sentence.
The others are fine.
Could you please check these few sentences for me, please? Thanks
1) He is ambitious and thirsty for power.
He turns into a murderous tyrant as a result of his ambition.
2) A vote was taken (do you know a synonym) in the late afternoon.
On July 4 (on July fourth)
but on the fourth of July.
3) The witches aren't able to distinguish between good and evil.
4) I hope you can wait until 10 November because we have to discuss which class to include in the project. What do you thing of including students from class 11 (16-year-old students?)
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