Could you help with the punctuation on this paragraph please! Therefore,supporting the fact that you can dress a diverse group of students one way, but they would not all believe or view things the same way. If there is a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school, very much like the United States in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government.

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The first "sentence" is such a garbled mess that it needs to be rewritten. Punctuation won't help.

". . . certain order in the school." << period

The last sentence needs to be rewritten.
Thank you Sue
Here it is again rewritten please help me. Therefore, supporting the fact, that you can dress a diverse group of students with uniforms, they would not see and believe the things the same way, as other students with uniforms. If there were a standard in place, then it would maintain a certain order in the school. Very much like the United States, in general, a country filled with diverse individuals, but all following the same set of laws set forth by the government.
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