Could be...in a thesis? The moon is either made of green cheese, or not...arguing it "could be" seems a little avoiding a detailed argument with evidence.
I have issues with the word "many" also.
Verdict: Many students mess up the thesis by arguing they cannot do it could be because they have not thought out their arguments well, in detail.
Think on this: What do you want to say? No generalizing, no vacillating. What is the point you want to make?
Could this be a good thesis? Could you please help me? In today's society many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth could this be because of wrong choices?
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You had two responses when you asked this earlier today. Both of us said it was not a good thesis.
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1423335009
Why did you post this again?
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1423335009
Why did you post this again?