Could this be a good thesis? Could you please help me? In today's society many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth could this be because of wrong choices?

Answer 1

Let's shorten it to this.

Many middle class people argue why they can not build wealth.

Answer 2

In today's society, many middle class people argue that they cannot build wealth because of wrong choices.

This is a better statement of the thesis, but I don't know how you will be able to support it.

Answer 3

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Answer 4

Thank you so much Ms Sue