Could someone tell me if the punctuation in this sentence is correct?

We received a tour of the offices after which, we met in the conference room where and Jane joined the group.

Could someone tell me if the punctuation in this sentence is correct?

We received a tour of the offices after which,<~~move this comma; it should be after "offices" we met in the conference room where and Jane joined the group.

Other than that one comma change (really two, I guess -- one to add and one to delete), the rest looks fine.

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It makes sense, but you would be better to put the comma after 'offices' instead of 'which', and to use the word 'and' instead of 'where'. eg. We received a tour of the offices, after which we met in the conference room and and Jane noined the group.

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