could anyone proof read my essay? could i send it to someone? If i post it here people might steal it. please i really need someone to proofread it.

Answer 1

We have no way for you to send us a paper for proofreading -- other than posting it here.

I urge you to run your paper through a spell check. Then follow the suggestions in this site.

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/561/01/

If you have three or four specific questions, you could post just those sentences.

Proofing your own work is a valuable skill and all students should learn to do it.

Answer 2

ms sue i just proofread it. I want to make sure it is good before i integrate the secondary sources. do you mind if you proofread a couple of paragraphs. please note i removed the page numbers of the quotes to save space.