I'll fix the first one. Then you try the other two, OK?
The professor's tests were long, difficult, and anxiety-ridden.
The original had two adjectives and one predicate in the series. All the items in a series need to be the same part of speech or grammatical construction.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
Now you try the other two, and I'll check them for you.
Correcting faulty Parallesim sentences.
1.The professors test were long,difficult,and produced anxiety.
2.Medical tests showed that neither being allergic to dust nor seasonal hay fever caused the child’s coughing fits.
3.The hair stylist warned her customers ,”I’m a beautician,not a magician.This is a comb;it’s not a wand.”
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