correct the ten mistake and write out the paragraph. the best girl at sport in the class is my best friend. last year she won two medals for swimming it was when we had a huge swimming gala at the bath in town. everyone in the lower school was there,and their parents.the noise was so loud that our teacher nearly went deaf there was a race foe all girls in our year my best friend won the race by two whole metres.the last race was for girls and boys.all the girls were screaming for my friend she managed to win by the tips of her fingers.

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The best girl at sports in the class is my best friend.
The best girl at sports in the class is my best friend. Last year, she won two medals for swimming. It was when the had a huge swimming gala at the Bath in Town. Everyone and their parents were there in the lower school. The noise was so loud that our teacher went nearly deaf. There was a race for all the girls in our year. My best friend won the race by two whole metres. The last race was for girls and boys. All the girls were screaming for my friend. She managed to win by the tips of her fingers.