Correct the following sentenses for subject-verb agreement,tenses and fragments.

1.Going home now,how I wish I could get ther before it start to rain.
2.This students keep making noise.
3.Everyone have a right to live happily ever after.
4.My car it is very beautiful.
5.When he thought he could afford to pay his own school fees.
6.I am writing my homework after every class.

3 answers

I'll be happy to check the sentences after you make the corrections needed.

Be sure to read the sentences aloud. You'll hear some of the errors that way.
1.My car is very beautiful
2.He thought he could afford to pay his own school fees
3.When I was young,I used to love playing with dolls
4.This student keeps making noise
5.This is great news indeed;I can't believe I made it
You haven't corrected the first set of sentences you posted.

You haven't given the directions for the second set of sentences.