Correct the following sentences for subject-verb agreement, tenses and fragments.

Question

1. Q -My car it is very beautiful.
A -My car is very beautiful.
2. Q -When he thought he could afford
to pay his own school fees.
A -He thought he could afford to pay
his own school fees.
3. Q -This students keep making noise.
A -This student keep making noise. OR
-These students keep making noise.
4. Q -When I was young, I use to love
playing with dolls.
A -When I was young, I loved playing
with dolls. OR
-When I was young, I used to love
playing with dolls.
5. Q -I'm don't like horror movies.
A -I do not like horror movies!
6. Q -Going home now, how I wish I
could get there before it starts
to rain.
A -Going home now, I wish I could
get home before it starts to rain.
7. Q -Everyone have the right to live
happily ever after.
A -Everyone has the right to live
happily ever after.
8. Q -These are great news indeed, I
can't believe I made it!
A -This is great news indeed, I
can't believe I made it!
9. Q -In 1990, he lead his team to a
glorious victory.
A -In 1990, he led his team to a
glorious victory.
10. Q -I am writing my homework after
every class.
A -After every class, I write my
homework.

Answer 1

8A -This is great news indeed; I
can't believe I made it!

6A -I am going home now; I wish I could
get home before it starts to rain.

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Otherwise, it is fine.

Answer 2

write a few sentence /a lot of money, I'd travel to paris and go up the eiffel tower