Compare and contrast your abilities as an academic writer now as opposed to when you began at Axia College. Using four comparatives and four superlatives within your responses, explain what has led to these changes and what changes you will make in the future.

Question

When I began attending Axia College I was not the best writer in my class. I learned to be more careful with my writing. This class has been the hardest class I have had. As I worked on my school work I became better, but not the best. I do not want to be the smartest kid in the class. I knew the more I tried to work on my writing the better I would be. I do not want to be the worst writer in my class, so I plan on putting 100% into learning the grammar rules. I need to learn to be smarter at grammar for my children. I do not want to be the smartest in the family but I want to be able to teach my children what I have learned.

Answer 1

Sounds good.

And I found 4 comparatives and 6 superlatives in there, so that's fine, too.

Commas are needed in a couple of places.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
See #s 2 and 3.

Answer 2

thank you

Answer 3

You're very welcome.