Question

Classify each sentence according to whether it is concise or not.
Concise writing is accurate and to the point, not wordy and redundant.

Concise Too Wordy





i am happy to be on a winning track.

id like to begin performance by singing unicorns

id like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called unicorns

the old lawnmower was dirty and rusty

i am happy to be on the track team due to the fact that it is a winning team.

Answer 1

Concise

Too Wordy

Too Wordy

Concise

Too Wordy