Choose the revision to the underlined sentence that best improves the style of the sentence.

A. Yet most Americans know nada about this thrilling game, so here goes.
B. Yet most Americans know very little when it comes to this cool game, so listen up.
C. Yet most Americans are in the dark about this great game, so here’s the rundown.
D. Yet most Americans are unacquainted with this exciting game, so here are the basics.

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C. Yet most Americans are in the dark about this great game, so here’s the rundown.

This option uses a more conversational tone and informal language ("in the dark" and "here's the rundown") that may resonate better with readers, improving the overall style of the sentence.