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Choose a major portion of "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson, rewrite a portion of it and make it more positive. You must write 5 full sentences in your response. make it seem like it is written by a 14 year old and show the original piece
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Original piece:
"Although the villagers had forgotten the ritual and lost the original black box, they still remembered to use stones. The pile of stones the boys had made earlier was ready; there were stones on the ground with the blowing scraps of paper that had come out of the box. Mrs. Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands and turned to Mrs. Graves. 'Come on,' she said. 'Hurry up.'"
Rewritten more positively:
Even though the villagers had changed some traditions and lost the original black box, they still remembered to gather together for a special event. The pile of stones the boys had collected was all set and ready to go; there were stones on the ground mixed in with colorful scraps of paper that had fluttered out of the box. Mrs. Delacroix picked up a big stone and turned to Mrs. Graves with a smile. "Let's go have some fun!" she said cheerfully. "Don't worry, we'll all have a great time together!"
"Although the villagers had forgotten the ritual and lost the original black box, they still remembered to use stones. The pile of stones the boys had made earlier was ready; there were stones on the ground with the blowing scraps of paper that had come out of the box. Mrs. Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands and turned to Mrs. Graves. 'Come on,' she said. 'Hurry up.'"
Rewritten more positively:
Even though the villagers had changed some traditions and lost the original black box, they still remembered to gather together for a special event. The pile of stones the boys had collected was all set and ready to go; there were stones on the ground mixed in with colorful scraps of paper that had fluttered out of the box. Mrs. Delacroix picked up a big stone and turned to Mrs. Graves with a smile. "Let's go have some fun!" she said cheerfully. "Don't worry, we'll all have a great time together!"
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