Choose a major portion of "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson, rewrite a portion of it and make it more positive. You must write 5 full sentences in your response. make it seem like it is written by a 14 year old

Answer 1

As the lottery began, the townspeople eagerly gathered in the square, excited for a chance to win a prize. Everyone laughed and chatted as they waited for their names to be called. The sun was shining, and the children played happily around the adults. When the winner was announced, the crowd erupted into cheers and applause, happy for their neighbor's good fortune. As they dispersed, they all looked forward to the next year's lottery, filled with hope and anticipation.