Change your thinking(Title of my reseach paper)

Question

How do I plan to support my thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments. My thesis statement is," Even though we experince situation that demonstrate this simple principle- the way we think determines the we feel".

Answer 1

Your thesis statement doesn't make much sense to me.

You might want to simplify it to "The way we think determines the way we feel." However, I think it may be difficult to find research to support this statement.

Answer 2

Thanks! I will revise it

Answer 3

If you haven't already included it, you might want to use the work of Albert Ellis and his ABC theory.

http://webspace.ship.edu/cgboer/ellis.html
http://spaz.ca/aaron/billious/RCYS/Chapter14.html
http://books.google.com/books?id=6mu3DLkyGfUC&pg=PA1&lpg=PA1&dq=%22Albert+Ellis%22+ABC&source=web&ots=yO86f0qhLB&sig=xRu5ARwRe8ONtni4S7rcRSLL0Q0&hl=en

I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.