1. "caused by"
"rise"
comma after "Lollardy"
2. "...spread in England for various reasons, among which was the..."
3. "struck England" would be better
comma after "conditions"
4. "a rise in the mortality rate"
comma after "prices"
5. delete word in parentheses
6. OK
7. "mistakenly" (watch the spelling)
The rest is fine.
Can you please check these alternatives I'm not sure of? Thank you very much.
1) The growing anticlericalism in 14th-century England was due to (caused by) the wealth of the clergy, the rise (birth, development) of a movement of reforms called Lollardy and the corruption of monastic orders, which lent money at interest.
2)Anticlericalism was caused by various reasons (or developed/spread in England for various reasons), among which the corruption of monastic orders.
3) The bubonic pleague spread all over England (or hit England) in 1348 and was caused by fleas living on black rats, the unhealthy living conditions and the complete lack of sanitation.
4) The black death brought about a high mortality (or a rise in the mortality rate?), a fall in prices and an increase in wages.
5) Also women could become Druids (or members of the Druids)
6) The Jews found in moneylending the only way of making money.
7) You (mistekenly?) switched from the present to the past and often forgot to add an "s" to the third person singular present forms (?)
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