Can you please check the following sentences? Thank you, Writeacher.
1) We are looking for a double room plus an extra bed for my ten-year-old child for ... nights from .. August to ...August. In particular, we would like to know your rates in half board (breakfast/dinner) for the said period.
2) Moreover, I would like to know if your hotel has a kids club and an outdoor playground (with football pitch). How far is it from the beach?
3) I'm looking forward to receiving your prompt reply.
4) It is necessary that you attend (not will attend?) the meeting.
It is necessary for you to attend..
You must attend...
5) It isn't necessary that she does the shopping.
6) It's forbidden that you park here.
You can't park here.
I advise you to study harder. You should/ouhgt to study harder.
7) He is probably going to the seaside.
He should/ought to be going to the seaside.
8) It would have been better if you had locked all the doors.
You should/ought to have locked all the doors.
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In particular, we would like to know your rates for half-board for these dates.
2) Moreover, I would like to know if your hotel has a kids' club and an outdoor playground (with football pitch). You'd use "playground" in American English, and "pitch" in British English. Where are you planning to take this vacation?
How far is it from the beach?
3) OK
4) It is necessary that you attend the meeting.
It is necessary for you to attend..
You must attend...
These are all correct.
5) It isn't necessary that she do the shopping. Since the verb "to do" needs to be in the subjunctive here, you need to use "do" not "does."
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6) It's forbidden that you park here.
You can't park here. OK
I advise you to study harder. You should/ought to study harder. OK
7) OK
8) OK