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three new and improved products that ive seen marketed lately is an iPhone 15,Meta smart glasses, and apple vision. Iphone 15 is not like all other phones,Escp IOS 18 which has not yet to come but comes next month,Iphone 15 allows you to record calls,change app colors, and also lets you lock an app. Meta smart glasses allows you to record on your glasses.apple vison allows you to escape from reialty.

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Recently, I've come across three exciting new products that have been marketed: the iPhone 15, Meta Smart Glasses, and Apple Vision. The iPhone 15 stands out from other smartphones with its upcoming iOS 18 update, scheduled for release next month. This model introduces features such as call recording, customizable app colors, and the ability to lock specific apps for enhanced privacy. The Meta Smart Glasses enable users to capture video directly from their eyewear, merging technology with everyday life. Meanwhile, Apple Vision offers an innovative way to escape reality, creating an immersive experience that redefines how we interact with our digital world.

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