Numbers 1 and 3 are run-on sentences and need to be divided into two sentences.
Number is fine, except it needs a comma.
How would you correct these sentences?
Can you help me correct these sentences?
1.She wants to become an environmental scientist she is especially interested in marine life.
2.If she can get a scholarship she would like to spend her senior year in New Zealand.
3.The Great Coral Reef almost cicles New Zealand it has more marine life than anywhere else in the world.
2 answers
Number 2 is fine, except it needs a comma.