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Technology has made numerous changes in the workplace. Describe an example you have experienced in which technology has changed the workplace for the better or for the worse. This can be an experience you have had as a customer, an employer or even an experience someone in your life has shared with you.

Make sure to write in complete sentences using correct spelling and grammar.
Response needs to be at least 3 sentences.

my paragraph:4 years or 5 years ago I was In a privet school where there was no computers and things and everything was handwriting. Then after that when I got into  public school everything seem different and things..then after that when everything was on computer I never actually used the computer until the 5th week of school and I noticed that I had so many missing assignments because I thought that the school didn't give out home work.

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Four or five years ago, I attended a private school where there were no computers, and all assignments were done by hand. However, when I transitioned to public school, everything felt different. I quickly realized that classes were primarily conducted using computers, but I didn’t use a computer until the fifth week of school. By then, I discovered I had many missing assignments because I mistakenly thought the school did not assign homework.

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