Question

Can you check if these are metaphorical definitions.

1. Friendship is a electric magnet.
2. Cooperation is a huge smile.
3. Determination is proudly hitting a home run.
4. Happiness is going sailing in a new boat.

Answer 1

Yes, but "electromagnet" is more correct that "electric magnet". I would also not equate deetermination to being "proud". It takes determination and a lot of hard work to be able to hit home runs.

Answer 2

Yes. Those are great metaphorical definitions.

Answer 3

All are good, as Drwls and Ms. Sue have said. In the first one, though, be sure to use "an" instead of "a" before a word that starts with a vowel:

<b>Friendship is <u>an</u> electric magnet.

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