Can someone read my eight sentence paragraph. A high school diploma is very important to me. With a high school diploma I can show my children that your never to old to go back to school. Which will set a good example for my children to show them they need to follow their dreams. I can also go to college or find a better job for myself. By setting a good example it will hopes show other adult as well they need to follow their dreams. It was hard to go back to school to get my high school diploma but it will be worth it in the end.

Answer 1

your = you're
to = too

Which will set a good example for my children to show them they need to follow their dreams. >> fragment

it will hopes >> ??