Can someone please help me reword this?! Thanks! I don't like what I did oof

Many every day activities lead to global warming because they produce pollution. When gas is burned in a car, it produces carbon dioxide, a Greenhouse gas. It floats up towards the atmosphere, and becomes the atmosphere. This causes the hat from the sun to get trapped, bouncing from the earth to the atmosphere. The sun doesn't stop producing heat, so the world gets hotter, causing many changes in temperature each decade that goes by.

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Nvm, I got it!

I changed it to:

Many every day activities lead to global warming because they produce pollution. When gas is burned in a car, it produces carbon dioxide, a Greenhouse gas. It floats up towards the atmosphere, and makes holes in the atmosphere which lets in those harmful UV radiation and sometimes also adds more atmosphere which could turn earth into the next venous. This causes the heat from the sun to get trapped, bouncing from the earth to the atmosphere. The sun doesn't stop producing heat, so the world gets hotter, causing many changes in temperature each decade that goes by.
Much better!
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