On a scale of 1-6, I'd give this a 2.
Your paragraphing is not good. Ideas are not fully developed. Well developed paragraphs have about 6-8 sentences each in order to completely develop (give details and interpretation) the topic sentence.
There are a few punctuation errors and one spelling error.
Can somebody score my 200word essay? Its not exactly 200 words.
What it means to be successful
Being successful has a different meaning to everyone. One would think that this is a very important thing in life. People strive for success, but not everyone gets the results wanted.
Being successful has a lot to do with acomplishment. To be successful in life is to gain the result or outcome disired. One person could not tell another person what success is, because it might not have the same meaning to him/her.
One thing to worry about when talking about success is stress. When people really want something, they stress over it when they don't get it as soon as they'd hoped. Stress leads to things like hair loss, grey hair, wrinkles, and other sorts of unpleasant things. So although success is a good thing, it is also important to look out for things/side effect that might come with it.
Success can also be a big responsibility. Once you succeed at something, people will start to have higher expectations. For example "You've done really well! When can we expect you to do something that will top it."
Being successful has a different meaning to everyone. To some people it can mean winning an award and to other people it can mean responsibility, but although many people have many different opinions, the conclusion is the same. Getting the results and outcomes that they disired.
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