Can I have your email Ms. Sue so i can send you my paper for proofreading

Answer 1

Jiskha tutors don't post their email addresses.

Here are some sites that show you how to proofread your own material.

http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Proofreading.html

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/editing-and-proofreading/