Can anyone give me a start to my essay?

I'm really having trouble starting off the topic sentence.
It's about immigration, coming to America.

Thank you so much.
-Allyson

4 answers

A topic sentence? You are writing a paragraph?

Or a thesis statement, for a whole essay?
A topic setence for beginning my first paragraph, in my essay. She said that I didn't need a thesis, not for this essay.
Immigrants had a vision of America, thinking it was the best place in the world, as told in the 2 famous documents: the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, but soon made the wrong mistake when traveling to America.
How does this sound?
It's too long and convoluted to be a good main-idea sentence. What is the single MAIN POINT you want to write about?

Go into this webpage and read about "beginnings" --
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
Especially, scroll down to the list of 5 ideas that are given for how to start introductory paragraphs.