Both Ada and Phil are evaluating their thesis statements, topic sentences, and evidence. If Ada finds

Question

that her essay doesn't have a thesis statement identifying the topic of the essay, she will reread the essay to
determine the main point of the essay. If Phil finds that his essay lacks evidence to support his thesis
statement, he will do additional research to find substantial evidence. Who is correctly evaluating and
revising his or her essay?
A. Both Ada and Phil
B. Neither Ada nor Phil
C. Only Ada
D. Only Phil

I chose D but I am not sure about my answer.

Answer 1

Why do you think it's only D?

Answer 2

because the thesis statement needs research so you can find more interesting way to approach the topic

Answer 3

I don't agree. I don't think a thesis statement needs to be more interesting.

I believe that A is the best answer. Please check back to see if there are other answers.

Answer 4

I agree with Ms. Sue.