The word "biomedical" is an adjective (see the -al ending?) and cannot be a subject. Please rethink and rephrase sentences one and five.
The word "people" is generally considered plural in itself, so its possessive is "people's" unless you are referring to people from different countries.
To whom does "them" refer in the third sentence?
The fourth sentence needs to be rephrased to remove all redundancy.
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Biomedical is a field that saves peoples’ lives by using advanced technology in medicine. Being a biomedical engineer requires being good at solving problems in biology and medicine. Engineers design new devices and instruments to help them do research or develop new processes that are needed to solve complex problems. Biomedical engineering is a very important field in the world in which it will play a strong role in the future. I predict Biomedical will be more in demand in the future as more materials and processes will be built in order to improve the quality of research done by scientists to find solutions to diseases and health problems.
i have to write a 1-2 page essay to explain the trends of biomedical materials and processes in the future. this is my introduction and then in the next paragraph, i will include the reasons why it will improve. the last sentence is my thesis.
my teachers also wants us to reference our research on a different piece of papers and not directly on the essay. Just so know.....
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Biomedical engineering is a field that saves peoples’ lives by using advanced technology in medicine. Being a biomedical engineer requires being good at solving problems in biology and medicine. Engineers design new devices and instruments which they can use to do research or develop new processes that are needed to solve complex problems. Biomedical engineering is a very important field in the world in which it will play a strong role in the future. I predict the subject of Biomedical will be more in demand in the future as more materials and processes will be built in order to improve the quality of research done by scientists to find solutions to health problems.
people's <~~correct possessive form
they = ?? (engineers? researchers? doctors? who??)
Biomedical engineering is a very important field and will play a strong role in the future of our world.
they = ?? (engineers? researchers? doctors? who??)
Biomedical engineering is a very important field and will play a strong role in the future of our world.