To determine if the addition fits well, consider the context in which it's being placed. If the surrounding narrative discusses the well-being of a character, animal, or situation that has deteriorated, this statement could effectively convey urgency or a disposition for care. It emphasizes the belief in the importance of returning to a natural environment as a solution.
However, if the preceding text does not set up this context or makes the statement seem abrupt or out of place, it may not be the right addition. Ensure that the tone, flow, and purpose align with the overall message and intent of the piece. If you can provide more context or the specific section where this addition would go, I can give more tailored advice!