Question

As a psychology major, when choosing my classes my main emphasis and focus is on my course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. However, there are other subjects that might not be a requirement, therefore, the skills might come in handy in the future. Courses like public speaking will help my communication skill and speech deliverance. It will also, help me overcome the fear of speaking in front of a large group of people. Computer skills such as excel and word will help keep up with the technology. Also, by dealing directly with people, it will be crucial for me to clearly understand them. Courses such as socioly, behavioral classes and diversity will be useful to understand the complexities of man. It will be very practical to volunteer and do different studies with people.

Answer 1

This is much better. :-)
I've made some corrections below.

As a psychology major, when choosing my classes, (comma) my main emphasis and focus is on my course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. However, there are other subjects that might not be a requirement; (semicolon) therefore, the skills might come in handy in the future. Courses like public speaking will help my communication skill and speech deliverance. It will also no comma help me overcome the fear of speaking in front of a large group of people. Computer skills such as Excel and Word (capitalization) will help keep up with the technology. Also, by dealing directly with people, it will be crucial for me to clearly understand them. Courses such as sociology (spelling), behavioral classes and diversity will be useful to understand the complexities of man. It will be very practical to volunteer to learn more about other people.

Answer 2

thanks a lot Miss Sue.

Answer 3

You're very welcome, Rose. :-)

MS. SUE

Answer 4

Comma problems here:

... course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc.

Should be this:

... course of study, such as psychology, social skills, English, etc.