Instructor feedback:
This essay does not have a clear thesis statement or focus. It is unclear what your argument is and what points you will be addressing in the essay. Additionally, your essay lacks structure and organization. It is important to have a clear introduction with a thesis statement, body paragraphs that address specific points and evidence, and a conclusion that summarizes your argument and provides a closing statement. I would also recommend providing more specific evidence and examples to support your arguments.
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