Another way to change these sentences "In conclusion, it takes discipline, time management, preparation, a computer, various tips, finances, and a desire to prepare for a major life change in going back to college for a degree. There are many things that a student needs to consider before returning to school; one of these is formulating an academic plan and the other is managing student stress."

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Start with your last sentence.

Rephrase everything so that no sentence has more than two clauses in it ... one main clause per sentence would be even better.
John f. kennedy was born in a family with a history of political and public service