It seems like you're trying to convey a message about permissions, ideas, and perhaps a request for more detailed feedback. Here’s a revised version of your message to make it clearer:
Subject: Request for Clarification and Feedback
Hi [Recipient's Name],
I hope this message finds you well. I wanted to follow up regarding the idea I shared about the Pacific topic. I noticed that the feedback provided lacked specific details, examples, and other relevant information that could help in developing the concept further.
Could you please clarify the reasons for the initial response? Additionally, I would greatly appreciate any detailed examples or insights that could guide us in refining the idea.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to your response.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
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