After becoming the first squirrel monkey to survive a space expedition, Mrs. Baker lived for twenty-seven years and was "married" twice.

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(Choice A) NO CHANGE
A
NO CHANGE
(Choice B) the life of Mrs. Baker lasted for twenty-seven years and included two "marriages."
B
the life of Mrs. Baker lasted for twenty-seven years and included two "marriages."
(Choice C) two "marriages" occurred over Mrs. Baker's twenty-seven year life.
C
two "marriages" occurred over Mrs. Baker's twenty-seven year life.
(Choice D) the twenty-seven year life-span of Mrs. Baker included two "marriages."
D
the twenty-seven year life-span of Mrs. Baker included two "marriages."

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The best choice for clarity and conciseness is:

(Choice D) the twenty-seven year life-span of Mrs. Baker included two "marriages."