'Administrative law involves decision making within the bases of a government organisation and deals with powers and functions of the administrative authorities, and the manner in which they form legislations to enforce legal obligations upon individuals.'
does that make sense?
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It is a wee bit of a run on sentence. It would run more smoothly with either a semi-colon to change it into a list of the three, or... a period dividing the sentences.
I agree with MsPi -- this needs to be rephrased so it is changed into 2 or 3 good sentences instead of 1 too-long sentence.
so can someone rephrase for me please
You give it a try, and I'll check your work for you.
No ideas? First of all, which words can you get rid of entirely. Wordiness is rampant in this!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
Here are the clauses and phrases in that too-long sentence; how will you revise them?
Administrative law involves decision making within the bases of a government organisation
and deals with powers and functions of the administrative authorities,
and the manner in which they form legislations to enforce legal obligations upon individuals.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm
Here are the clauses and phrases in that too-long sentence; how will you revise them?
Administrative law involves decision making within the bases of a government organisation
and deals with powers and functions of the administrative authorities,
and the manner in which they form legislations to enforce legal obligations upon individuals.