Your revision of punctuation for #1 is correct, yes. Be sure to check capitalization, too.
What will you with the other two. Be sure to revise them with correct capitalization, too, even though you're concentrating on punctuation.
Add brackets or dashes and other punctuation so these sentences are correct.
i did 1 by my own. can you check it for me please?
1. I have lots of animals - sheep, goats, horses and fish - that i have to feed everyday.
2. we will need to think carefully about what we take with us tents sleeping bags and torches are essential
3. help me decide what to do call me at home i must make a decision tonight
5 answers
2. We will need to think carefully about what we take with us - (tents, sleeping bags and torches are essential)
Study these, and then revise. Read these very carefully before you make changes.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/colon.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/parentheses.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/bracket.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/colon.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/parentheses.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/bracket.htm
ok thanks ignore my other question
One more you need to study:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/semicolon.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/semicolon.htm