Add adjectives to improve the following passage.

The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

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The tall man stopped by the sunny park to gently pet the friendly dog. Then he stepped into the crowded bus. The rickety bus made several stops before it finally pulled up in front of a bustling restaurant. He eagerly jumped out and quickly ran up the worn steps. A while later, he returned with a crumpled bag of delicious scraps for the excited dog.