A student is writing a story. Read the draft of the story and select a sentence the student should substitute for sentence 4 to help convey a more vivid picture of the setting described in the paragraph?

Question

(1) Anna threw a shawl around her shoulders before heading out the door. (2) All around, the scent of fall was present in the air. (3) A certain crispness mixed with a delicious earthy undertone paired well with the changing colors of the leaves and the presence of pumpkins everywhere Anna turned. (4) There was nothing like fall in the mountains. (5) She hugged herself to ward off the hint of cold beginning to creep in, closed her eyes, and breathed in deeply. (5) Her favorite season had finally arrived
Responses

There was nothing Anna enjoyed more than spending fall in the small mountain town where she had lived her whole life.
There was nothing Anna enjoyed more than spending fall in the small mountain town where she had lived her whole life.

There was nothing like fall when you lived in the mountains, and Anna tried to do all she could to enjoy the season to the fullest.
There was nothing like fall when you lived in the mountains, and Anna tried to do all she could to enjoy the season to the fullest.

There was nothing Anna loved more than driving through small mountain towns like Ouray to see the beauty that only fall could bring.
There was nothing Anna loved more than driving through small mountain towns like Ouray to see the beauty that only fall could bring.

There was nothing like fall in the small mountain town Anna resided in, where she was surrounded by vibrant Aspen trees and snowcapped peaks.

Answer 1

The best option to substitute for sentence 4 to help convey a more vivid picture of the setting is:

"There was nothing like fall in the small mountain town Anna resided in, where she was surrounded by vibrant Aspen trees and snowcapped peaks."

This sentence adds specific details about the setting, enhancing the imagery of fall in the mountains.