To improve the organization of the draft and provide context for the paper's subtopics, the following sentences can be added to the underlined introduction:
A. Trade schools offer a streamlined approach to education. They focus on developing a particular skill set and knowledge base for a career rather than receiving a general education.
Adding this sentence helps establish what trade schools are and how they differ from traditional college education, setting the stage for the discussion on their benefits and the current needs in the workforce.
B. Skilled trade positions are plentiful. Less plentiful are the men and women with the qualifications to fill them.
This sentence provides context about the current labor market, clarifying the shortage of skilled workers in relation to the availability of jobs.
Including both sentences A and B would enhance the introduction by giving a clearer understanding of trade schools' purpose and the existing gap in the labor market that the paper will address.
Ultimately, the following sentences should be selected:
- A. Trade schools offer a streamlined approach to education. They focus on developing a particular skill set and knowledge base for a career rather than receiving a general education.
- B. Skilled trade positions are plentiful. Less plentiful are the men and women with the qualifications to fill them.