Which conclusion would be the most appropriate?
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When I finally stopped rolling, one ski was stuck in a bush, and the other was halfway down the mountain.
When I finally stopped rolling, one ski was stuck in a bush, and the other was halfway down the mountain.
After that, I stuck to the tricks I already knew, which was more fun anyway.
After that, I stuck to the tricks I already knew, which was more fun anyway.
Matt felt pretty bad for daring me to go off that jump, but we stayed friends.
Matt felt pretty bad for daring me to go off that jump, but we stayed friends.
Next year I think I will try snowboarding instead. Snowboarding is an entirely different skill.
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The most appropriate conclusion for the personal narrative would be:
After that, I stuck to the tricks I already knew, which was more fun anyway.
This conclusion effectively reflects the realization that the student had about the importance of being true to oneself and not trying to impress others, tying in well with the overall theme of the narrative.
