A story begins with a character trying to make a major life decision. The character goes to sleep, and the next day, the storyline splits in two. One thread of scenes follows the character showing their life if they had decided the big choice one way. The other follows the character showing their life if they had decided the big choice another way. Both paths involve unexpected downsides and upsides. Near the end of the story, the character hits their head in both storylines. For a moment, the character fully understands both realities and must choose which reality to return to. What subplot would add tension to the story?

Question

A)one in which the character's decision has dramatically different effects on a dear friend in each reality
B)One in which there are small hints that the character was dealing with a head injury the whole time.
C)One in which the character uncovers a series of clues to discover what made them dislike making big decisions.
For me A and B make sense.. But I can only pick one.

Answer 1

Both subplot options A and B could indeed add significant tension to the story, but if you have to choose one, I recommend going with A) one in which the character's decision has dramatically different effects on a dear friend in each reality.

Here’s why: This subplot creates an emotional connection and stakes that are personal and relatable. The character’s decision not only impacts their own life but also significantly affects someone they care about, which raises the tension and urgency surrounding their ultimate choice. The character will feel the weight of their decision in a more profound way, as they grapple with the potential consequences not just for themselves, but for their friend’s happiness and well-being.

As they navigate their two realities, the character might experience guilt or regret upon seeing how their choices directly alter their friend’s life in each scenario. This adds layers to the narrative and can enhance the emotional climax when the character realizes the full ramifications of their choice. The contrasting experiences of their friend can serve to heighten the stakes, making the decision point at the end even more pressing and complex.

While subplot B (the hints of a head injury) could add an intriguing layer of psychological tension, subplot A provides a more immediate and relatable conflict, making the character’s dilemma resonate on a deeper emotional level.